FAT CANDY
I love were candy, I'd be fat
If sorrow were a fly swatter, I'd be flat
If marshmallows were dreams, I'd be a smore
If pentagons meant sanity, my count would be four
If friends were like mirrors, I'd live in vain
If fear were a sports car, I'd opt for a plane
If pennies were knowledge, I'd have 2 cents
If laundry were patience, I'd be the ball of lent
If men were sugar, I'd take mine sour
If pride were measured in minutes, I'd last an hour
If candles were maturity, I'd be at the end of my wick
If roses were honesty, I'd often need a prick
If hope were like water, I'd sometimes start to boil
If serenity were milk, I'd very quickly spoil
**As a disclaimer I need to say that I was 18. So I had a very limited knowledge of the world and most of the concepts in this poem. I would venture to say that this rhyme would be slightly different if I wrote it today. Thanks also to Rachel Bennet, who penned several of the lines with me, and Ms. Lawrence, my creative writing teacher. **
I loved it! Thanks for sharing! I know another poem written by 2 18-yr-olds that could be posted too, though no one else would understand anything on it :)
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